Wednesday, January 21, 2009

*cough* *wheeze* *cough*

I'm truly beginning to hate this cold....

Anyway I came up with a couplet last night while playing Snakes on a Sudoku (for the love of God just don't ask...), and here it is for your critique:

How can you leave your man to suffer pain and strife
when that same decent man has given you his life
for you and that baby you decided you would keep
and now you're not even within reach?

I know it's not great right now and I'm not sure how or where I'll add to it, or if I'll make anything of it at all, but I'm beginning to feel the creativity flowing again.... YAY!!!

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